it still needs a lot of work with periods/punctuation/line break type stuff, but my biggest question is am i being totally blind just because this is about brian? does it totally suck? k thanx.
because it will snow soon
and the snow will come down
like mirrors into little worlds
that end and begin at our finger tips
full of the secrets of doorways
and the distance between
our dreams and the world we walk around in
with our daytime bodies.
because leaves have a way of telling you
that death is the eternal savior,
come to gnaw away all of our faults
our erratic and ill conceived injustices
because happiness is a car ride
to a man in a sport coat 3000 miles away
and each mile is a marker
for what you are leaving behind.
because every choice we make in this life
is a distinct division between
what we want and what we wanted
and worlds divide like orchid seeds
to sprout something new and unexpected